Feedback on falling scene.

This scene is supposed to show that the floor has come apart and the two cliffs are coming apart from each other. My teacher - Bill gave me the advice that the cliffs look too high up and should be at a flatter angle and more on a lean to show that they're falling away from each other. The movement lines should also come off of the character rather than coming from all different directions, I will be responding to this feedback by following Bills advice by making the angle better.